It can't get better than this!!

(My first poem… Copy rights reserved ;) )

I met a gal during those days of my college…
Soon we became close without our knowledge…

Days, weeks passed and then the months…
Our friendship grew and so the story begins...

I realized then I am having a crush…
But my heart said - don’t be in a rush…

Meanwhile, college was over I felt really sad…
Coz, we can’t meet so often, that’s too bad…

We promised each other, to be in touch…
This made me smile - even in a moment as such…

We kept our promise as the time flew by…
Through calls, chats, mails - and the meetings nearby…

My mind said 'no' and my heart said 'yes'…
She is the one, but I couldn’t confess…

Yes, I am in love and she’s my princess
but, am I her prince? I was clueless...

And then arrived the big day of my life…
I told her my feelings “will you be my wife”?

She didn’t say yes, nor did she refuse…
She was surprised - and, I was confused…

And then she agreed, with her lovely cheeky smile…
I was so on cloud nine! The wait was worthwhile…

I spoke to my parents and they agreed…
And now her parents, I thought, I’ll succeed…

We visited her place and spoke to her dad…
he too agreed, you see I am not that bad… :)

I got a better job and then built a house…
In that structure of my dreams I could see my spouse…

She too got the job in the same company…
And to my surprise - we were in the same team! Oh honey…

And then…

And then I fell down from my cot…
It was just a dream - So sad, is it not?

I stayed there for a while, dreaming about my love…
with a heavy heart, I whispered “It can’t get better than this… “

Comments

Krishna said…
Sunil, Good one man...
kanu..... said…
hey nice 1 sunil....
Sunil Padiyar said…
Thanks Krishna, Prity, Kanu :)
Saru Singhal said…
It's so nice. And yes, thanks for reminding us that it's a protected work:) Really Beautiful, especially the phrase, 'the wait was worthwhile'
Saru Singhal said…
I forgot to write, I love the title:)
Sunil Padiyar said…
Hey.. :) thanks a lot Saru.. :)
sowmya said…
lovely poem...
keep writing & smiling :)
Sunil Padiyar said…
Thank you Sowmya.. :)
Sneha Sunny said…
I just wish someone would write such a poem for me as well.... Really lovely....and I would say this poem can't be better than this....it's the best!!
jojofeelings said…
Beautiful poem. It's great to have found your blog (because you found mine) and now am here for good. :)

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